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tell me if you like it. i think it described how i was feeling for a while. i still kind of feel that way.

Trapped

They think I'm good, They say I'm nice,
But that's my greatest sacrifice.
There is no one that can give me advice.
I feel like I'm trapped in a block of ice.

They just don't know. They don't understand.
They strike me down with their psychic hands.
I feel like I can barely stand.
It's as if I'm stuck in quicksand.

They don't like what I truly am,
So I hide myself, just like a clam.
All my secrets, I just cram.
They're the lions, I'm just a lamb.

It's almost like I'm under a spell.
I shut myself inside my shell
To escape this fiery hell.
I need to scream, I need to yell.

I am trapped in this time and place.
I will never win this race.
But I've decided to show my face.
And this world I'll now embrace.
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Love it!
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Very good, I like it.
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thanks guys. i apreciate it.
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