poem called Broken

As i try to run away
from the life i have
it seems like everything i had, fell apart
broken pieces landing at my feet
searching through the pieces
i find a few happy things
those happy thoughts fade away
the fallen pieces move around
mixing the good with the bad
and all that remains is a girl
with a broken life

-note: i didnt write this my best friend in school did....any thoughts?

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Sad but true. That was a nice poem. Well done to your friend.

I loved it so descrybs my life.

i know the meaning behind it and the "punch line" is good lol
but more suitable words could be used...otherwise it's a really nice poem

its sad i used to laugh at the people whom wrote these and be concerned for my friend (im still concerned) but now i find that a lot of this i can find in my own life