poem or not?

i don`t know this is a poem and i think it sucks definitely!!

here goes..

Every path always have a key.
Even the smallest and has no importance does have one.
Never fear anything...fear is basic instinct.
Flower don`t bloom by themselves,happiness makes them bloom.
Darkness is the friendly environment,Deep in dark,always a Golden flower to be given by someone.

Sleeping,must i be awake...
Dreams of what we do,show us..


There`s was never one who died...
Every realm,every world,shares the same sky
the same smiles,the same feelings.

Destiny is what we share..
Burden,we are all equal.

but.....
Red fires upon us..
make us all hatred...
The mountains show us how beautiful.

Sorrows were swept away and renewed..
Sadness just fall upon us.

Reunion,we all be happy.
Happiness make us all live together.
Laughter of happiness strecthed our desire to live longer..
Laughter of happiness always be there to,
sweep away the cruel fates..just like sadness and sorrows.

I STILL THINK THIS SUX!!(x

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