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Original Post:
by: User17122 on Jan 31, 2009

I've been here for three full days,
in this bathtub my body stays.
no one knows I'm still there-
that's because I had no one to care.

See my ice blue lips.
better yet, my cold dead hips.
he wont find me, he wont cry-
here in this bathroom, I did try.

For to my throat he held his knife,
I begged and pleaded for my life.
soon the bathtub began to fill-
till I became silent and still...

here in this bathroom, I still Lay.
body bleeding for 3 long days.
for his heart my soul I sold-
and now the water's grown really cold.

i'd like to know what you think ^-^