Read my poem plz!!!

Insane Hunger

Bloodlust, Sweet blood
Humans are the source
Flesh so yummy and tender
So Hungry, too thirsty
I want it I Crave it
Give it to me, the blood the flesh
Crunching of bones echos
Rivers of blood fills wells
Darken sky, blood Moon
Starless, Timeless, endless
Blood lust, Sweet blood
Running through my body
The Living blood of Humans
Sweet sweet tender, juicy flesh
Flesh pick clean of bones
I want it I crave it
Too thirsty too hungry
Give it to me

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so wat do ya ppl think?

well i like it , the end could of been more creative...but
still it's good

oh well thnx...that was all that came to me...

thats cool

i love it!

*covers neck*

really good, lol, like your explaining a deep lust,
for blood lol.

blood lust... gray desire is in this poem