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Everyone has two zodiac signs, a sun sign and a moon sign. It's basic knowledge. However, your sun sign doesn't necessarily dictate your personality as some people are more in tune with their moon sign. My spell is aiming at switching my ruling zodiac from one to the other. I haven't tested it yet as I'm waiting for the upcoming eclipse.

This is one of the first spells that I've ever written, so I would appreciate some feed back. How I can improve it, what tools you would suggest using and how, etc. Thank you!

Forever trapped in the shadows of Sagittarius,
I search for a way to break free,
To find my place among the Gemini,
To become the girl I seek to be!
Mighty Mercury, hear my cry!
Help me flip the coin on it?s head,
No longer shall I follow the sun,
But the beautiful moon instead,

What once was fire now dies to embers,
Leaving behind a lonesome howl,
The stirrings of a new beginning,
As wind sweeps forth from the South,