sad stories...(the racer)

your first story made me cry a little.

Luzifer

sassy, these are both awesome!

both stories made me cry, i will cherish you forever cute, i love you so much

i didn't finish reading your story but the little that i read is really good.keep it up

I didn't read the second story...only the first and it was enough. These are useless. The the resulting death in the first was the fault of the woman anyway. If she wouldn't have been so greedy and wanting things on her aniversary, it wouldn't have happened. Patience is require in a relationship. The fact that he had been with her that long should have prooved he loved her. That's pathetic. No sympathy will be given by me as it is her fault to begin with. I was so disgusted by the first, I didn't dare read the second. That's my spill.

maybe but she is good anyway.. perhaps it's just a story. don't be bad.

The first one captivated me, and ill read the other one later maybe. The only part i dont believe is of course the him crying in the car, thats b.s. and the ending letters and crap. Other then that its a completely likely story of woman get together with jerk who doesnt really care about her. Would him giving her that after so long of neglect make up for it? I mean he doesnt even give her enough attention to know that shes crying for hours! Im not even sure he knows her name, guys who give pet names are usually just making up for that fact.

I dont agree with Yag at all, thats just mean. You cant place the blame on other people when others have weak minds or hearts thats b.s. The time a guy spends with a girl has nothing to do with love, love should be shown and constantly reinforced. Guys will spend theyre life with a girl as long as they can leach off them and get free sex.

Haha, Xeno your posts always make me laugh, not in a bad way. There are a few things I agree with you on. I really didn't think about it but, if he didn't notice her crying for hours, then he was either deaf and blind or he appearantly didn't care. I also agree with you on how most jerks stay with a girl for one reason. My above post my have seemed harsh but I just don't like whiney people. Heh heh.

*sigh*
I was under the inpression this was an actual event. I was feeling for you but then I just stopped, only because I started not caring =)

it kind of droned, It seems like a myspace posting that at the end says something along the lines of repost or die...
Personaly I think it would make a lifetime movie hit!
So sell it =)

As for the second one...too long didn't read

i love them, you should post some more