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by: polki123 on Jul 27, 2008

hi never released nay of the things that i have wrote but here is one please tell me what you think good or bad comments i odnt mind we learn from our mistakes so critisicm is wanted

As i stand alone in this world
And think of what is to come
So many people that walk by
Not knowing what is to come
So many deaths have come to past
Yet so many deaths are still to come
Oh how i stand alone in this world
To sad to talk
To happy to cry
Yet the pain i have had has made me see
That although i stand alone
There are other people that stand with me

again you can say anything you want