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Ok so, this is a spell i wrote (I'm sixteen btw, that's why i need feedback. It's a bad "To give someone what they deserve or bad luck."
Needed: Black pepper, Vinegar, A cauldron or pot or something to burn things in, paper.

Write the name(s) of the person(s) that did something bad to you on a piece of paper, visualize what they have done wrong. Hold the paper out and start sprinkling the black pepper, which symbolizes the spiteful thing that person has done to you.

Fold the paper in half, being sure to keep the black pepper in) then sprinkle the salt the same as the black pepper. Imagine the salt is absorbing the negativity out of the situation of whatever they did.

Fold the paper in half again (Again, being sure not to spill the salt everywhere) and dip the tip of your other hand's fingers in the vinegar. And lightly splash the folded paper.

Set the paper on fire and visualize the smoke becoming an energy and the person(s) are being surrounded by it, and that it has now been lifted off of you and it is now following them around instead of you, and it will continue until they feel exactly what you did.

-Begin saying the spell at the beginning as you're adding the pepper-

"Goddess Tyche, mistress of fortune
Hear my plea
I lay (Name(s) of the person(s))'s fate in your powerful hands
I feel no empathy so do what you will
Show him exactly as i feel" x3

So what'd you all think?